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Strange to think...

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Strange to think of people gone 
on a day such as this. 
As walking I go, breathing to heaven 
with all the other moving souls 
filing into into the lamp lit station,
A thick procession of winter coats
like mourners at a funeral keeping 
a grand silence between us.
Are the dead looking down at us?
Ferrying terminal to terminal
in the lonely rattling dark
running circular with our flawed thoughts,
what’s new to say today? 
Except perhaps there is too much talk
or maybe not enough,
that everybody is looking to alleviate
the burden of their loneliness,
really everybody wants to be loved
or at least recognised
for how tired they’ve become.
That’s how it is,
we’re all pulling and pushing
in the burden of our longing,
All wanting to both be and be apart from the world.
While all around we greet the evidence of our loss,
in every turned newspaper, 
men lost from women
men lost from themselves,
widening the gap  
between the public expression 
and the private utterance.
Is this how we wave goodbye to one another?
goodbye to truth? and goodbye to the world?
Clinging to the rails, 
station to station,
terminal to terminal,
keeping our silence, 
journeying into the dark.

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Tom Harding

Tue 12th Dec 2017 23:03

Hi all, thanks for the comments. Very kind as usual! Thanks for asking Ray yes at last the book is available now...
https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/191158703X/ref=cm_sw_r_fa_apa_kVZjAbMVQRPQE

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raypool

Tue 12th Dec 2017 21:57

A haunting by the isolation within crowds - the imposition of thoughts on vast tracts unknowable Tom. (Or I am trying to write a poem as a comment?) You do manage to transport US and that's the main thing. Any news re your book yet?

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 12th Dec 2017 16:37

I like the railway/station analogy of our travel through life & could imagine "the passed" crowding along platforms lit by
the old hissing gas lamps trying to make way for the
newly arrived. I found myself thinking...1st, 2nd or 3rd
class?...depending on the price paid in life's journey.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 10th Dec 2017 14:46

And you power on - with crucial observations and deftness of touch. Great to see you online today. Season's Greetings .

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