Leaving Ambiguity

I chase the meaning 

of your


as words turn 

rolling off your tongue;

the meaning heard    

taken with a pinch 


To the flip side you turn

as you leave,as you say it is you

or is that me you mean

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◄ beautiful grave

Poem of a moment ►



Wed 6th Dec 2017 06:36

Thank you Jon,your comment is appreciated.

All the best des

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Tue 5th Dec 2017 22:27

Hi Desmond
Interesting poem. Says a lot without the need for over explanation.
Great last three lines which sum up the fragility of the situation very well. Nice one.

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