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beautiful grave

When the last of light

leaves from my eyes

and I stare with a distant gaze

remember please,

the best of me 

as you lay me in my grave

remember us

and live for me

though your love not be a slave

to the memories 

that we shared 

to the memories that we made

 

 

You gave to me

the sweetest dream

so I shall,forever rest

and in my soul 

there will forever be

the memories that is us

so rest me please

into history 

your love not be a slave

for l will rest

where love still flowers

in the field of memories

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Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 1st Dec 2017 20:57

Thank you Martin, your comment is very much appreciated thanks.

All the best des

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Dec 2017 20:15

Nicely put Desmond. I love the way you have rounded it off with

where love still flowers
in the field of memories

Lovely

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