salvation
hands clasped
in desperation
eyes wide open
in elevation
vapoured words
for Inhalation
whispering lips
of exultation
a soul set
in exaltation
with belief
these words
salvation
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Desmond, these words, for me, encapsulate so much bordering on the anguish of the human soul and deliverance. I shall ponder on this poem for some time to come. Thank you. Keith
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David Taylor-Jones
Tue 21st Nov 2017 09:11
I love the flow and the rhythm of this poem, like Keith I'm going to have to keep pondering on your words to get the depth in them