tell me

Is there anything that hurts more

than to know 

you mean nothing 

to the person who

means so much

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Jennifer Seguin

Thu 9th Nov 2017 19:40

MC thank you I like that suggestion very much!

Tony Hill

Thu 9th Nov 2017 14:09

I like the pared down language of this piece, Jenn. Less is sometimes more, as they say. Tony

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 9th Nov 2017 13:50

Hope lives in hope!
I like the brevity of this bit of reality.
I would have put "means" in the final line to maintain the theme.
But that's purely a personal view.

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Jemima Jones

Thu 9th Nov 2017 10:31

nothing higher or deeper than the height and depths of spurned love Jenn.Thank you.Jemima.

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