jane wilcock

Perfect

Saturday 21st November 2009 11:53 pm (first posted Monday 2nd November 2009 9:14 pm)

( this is not about my daughters, see comments below. Please read it as a romance...)

I don’t need a telescope to know you’re a star

I don’t need a microscope to see what you are

It’s clear to me

It’s clear as day

You’re perfect in every way.

I don’t need a bank to know what you’re worth

I don’t need an atlas to see you are my Earth

It’s clear to me

It’s clear as day

You’re perfect in every way.

I don’t need psychiatry to know that I’m sane

I don’t need a surgeon to see you’re in my brain.

It’s clear as day

It’s clear to me

You’re perfect in every way

It’s clear to me

It’s clear as day

You’re perfect in every way.

Comments

Tue 8th Dec 2009 20:40

Hi Jane, good to see you posting, this says it as it is, no doubt of feelings here, just posted a romantic one myself! Jeff X

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 06:59

She reads your poetry perfectly too Jane - a very accomplished young lady - perhaps I should get you to come and bring my rabble up. Nice one. x

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 21:40

aaaaw... I thought you were talking about me for a minute;
but I see you're a proud mum !

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