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One Moment

I fell for you.

I loved you.

I opened my heart and soul to your infinite worlds of possibility.

I touched you.

I held you.

I felt safe and secure in the sacred silence of your arms.

But you were scared.

You were closed.

Meeting every tender word with thought rather than feeling.

You could have been the one,

But now you're just one moment.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 5th Oct 2017 14:23

I was struck by 'meeting every tender word with thought rather than feeling'. A major problem succinctly put, and often an insurmountable hurdle in a relationship.

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Raj Ferds

Thu 5th Oct 2017 06:50

Beautiful Kati. The way I see it every moment opens the doors to other moments. So enjoy the NOW.

My favourite line? "I opened my heart and soul to your infinite worlds of possibility."

Would love to see some more.
Raj

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Wed 4th Oct 2017 20:18

loved this thought, I write in moments as well it is good to know that great writers think alike...

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