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'Siren'

 
She was Siren, a pricktease
who knew how to please,
a temptress in provacative dress
inviting intimate caress.
She was an ice-queen
'treat them mean
keep them keen',
let them dream
of soft warm spaces
and exotic hiding places,
deep moist chasms
and mindblowing orgasms.
Kept them fighting with the rest
for a glimpse of soft bare breast,
a flash of nymphlike leg,
brought them to their knees to beg.
Kept them knocking at the door
bearing gifts, wanting more
than a fumble on the floor
that rocked their inner core
spent but not fulfilled,
their passion overspilled
and lost in denim threads.
She avoided all their beds
full of promises unsaid,
preferred messing with their heads.
She was Siren, she knew how to please
mistress of the art of pricktease
at only seventeen, kept them keen,
treated them mean, let them dream.



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Jeff Dawson

Thu 12th Nov 2009 17:43

Tons of deserved comments Nickt, very enjoyable, great read, best wishes Jeff X

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 28th Oct 2009 14:34

Thanks everyone so much for the great comments. Feel quite overwhelmed......really glad you all enjoyed it. ( Have you cooled down yet guys, I've been told there were a few cold baths and heads in the fridge yesterday!!) lol.......wonder if 'Siren' can have another outing at some point?..........haha.....get the ice buckets at the ready, she may pounce on a performance night!:-))))

Seriously, great encouragement, didn't know how a female would be received writing about mindblowing orgasms and using the word 'pricktease' etc. Thanks guys and gals for reading and commenting.

Nicky.......(or minx, to Gus) xx

Steve Smith

Wed 28th Oct 2009 12:22

well crafted, rolls like a wheel.,spins like a coin and comes up 'tails' when you call 'heads'.
Steve Smith

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Tue 27th Oct 2009 20:22

really like this!

Rachel Bond

Tue 27th Oct 2009 18:15

I like this Nicky. How did you know me?

thanks for kind words on my poem Cradle,

Rachel

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John Aikman

Tue 27th Oct 2009 16:49

Well, they say 'write what you know'! : )

Superb poem...and I bet it will go down well live...so to speak!

: )

Jx

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Isobel

Tue 27th Oct 2009 16:36

A great poem Nicky - yes I can see a lot of Gus in this one - small wonder he loves it...Lovely to see a woman also capable of writing with this kind of style.
x

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Andy N

Tue 27th Oct 2009 13:55

good rhyme here.. know one or two like this! lol

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Francine

Tue 27th Oct 2009 13:12

LOVE IT Nicky : )
Flows really well with the rhyme, which is such a talent in itself to create something so captivating with meaning where the words are not strained to match.

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 27th Oct 2009 13:06

I used to put their fire out...

...as fast as they could sling 'em under me!


Wonderful poem, you knew I'd like that one ...minx!

Gusxx

steve mellor

Tue 27th Oct 2009 12:28

Chuff
This sounds like my teen years. I'm all wrung out now, and I was just about to have lunch.
I'll have to have a lie down now.
;-)))

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