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The Twilight Years

The Twilight Years

 

Should I go home to die

or remain here to lie

Shangri-la does not exist

so why stay here and persist

 

Should I return to my home county

as if reclaiming some lost bounty

Could there be a corner waiting for me

in the shade of an old oak tree

 

Three score years and ten

and along comes this yen

To abandon a peripatetic existence

and live off a pension and subsistence

 

Would I be content to put up my feet

and settle for my final seat

Is the best all now done

is this the end of all the fun

 

Or should I shake off this lethargy

and stop pondering on purgatory

I think I might postpone this thought

for as yet I have not been caught

◄ The Surrogate Writer

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keith jeffries

Sat 2nd Sep 2017 20:28

MC., Thank you for your comment and words of trusted wisdom. Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 2nd Sep 2017 17:17

Thoughts on the future are always relevant and when
expressed as cogently as these, they have particular
resonance.
"The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence" -
are words most of us know but they move in two directions -
towards a sun-filled Shangri-la and back to a comforting
chair within reach of a cosy fire or a welcoming pub amongst the fond and familiar.
To paraphrase some older well-known lines in support of
the latter, showing that such thoughts are by no means
new:
"Go take your place among
Those who were lads when you were a lad
When all the world was young."

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