Music blares and we cast our stares
In the direction of its hypnotic beat
The air waves shudder as our hairs
Stand to attention as we tap our feet.
The silence is forced to make way
For the rhythm of restless instruments
The sound of music disturbs the day
Masking the truth of Earth's elements
Now this music that is filling your head
Used to be knowledge and books instead.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Wed 23rd Aug 2017 09:05
I seem to be following Keith's trail of comments and agreeing with him. Thought provoking indeed. Thanks for posting. Colin.
Aishah, Poignant indeed. The last two lines are very thought provoking for us all. Thank you for this. Keith
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Andy N
Wed 23rd Aug 2017 12:44
the splitting of the last two lines away from the rest of the piece is masterful.
excellent write x