Balcony

entry picture


Sat alone except for the cats
who've come to watch the moths
in the light above the table
I drink wine and breathe in the warm air
above the emptying restaurant below
and listen to a last group spilling onto
the Carrer d’En Bordils
with a crescendo of mopeds and laughter
and footsteps, a girl in white,
with dark limbs, glimpsed
between the railings, retreating
until there is nothing
except the night
quiet in its corners;
the sea rising and falling,
the ghost of a cat passing this way and that,
the same wine new with defeat,
the moths still working at the light.

🌷(5)

◄ An Hour Before

Late Summer ►

Comments

Profile image

Tom Harding

Thu 17th Aug 2017 16:20

All thanks for the kind comments. For those that guessed you're correct it's Porto cristo, although I think the ghost of a few ex holidays in Greece have influenced hence the Cohen reference!

Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 17th Aug 2017 01:59

I totally agree with everything said here in the comments.
Also thoroughly enjoyed my 'glass of wine' (although I don't drink) and atmospheric 'visit' to your balcony. Thanks.

Profile image

Stu Buck

Wed 16th Aug 2017 11:57

brilliantly evocative and no wonder you have chosen senor cohen as the picture, this is very reminiscent of his musings

Profile image

Laura Taylor

Wed 16th Aug 2017 09:49

Mmm lovely Tom, nicely evocative, tinged with sadness. Kind of your speciality I think.

Wee typo though - 'whose' - should that not be 'who've?

Profile image

raypool

Tue 15th Aug 2017 23:23

It feels with your poems that time just suspends and allows for details to be revealed - a great trick and an enviable one Tom. A sense of mystery pervades and also timelessness.

I Can't praise it enough. POTW or i'm a Dutchman.

Profile image

Paul Waring

Tue 15th Aug 2017 17:24

Hi Tom, like this one very much, great atmosphere. As a reader, you can really imagine being there (in Porto Cristo by any chance?). Anyway, lovely poem.

Paul

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 15th Aug 2017 08:11

I read the first few lines and my mind slipped away to Paris but then you took me to Spain - Mallorca? Wherever, it was lovely sitting with you and sharing that glass of wine moment Tom. Cheers! Col.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message