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For You

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I loved you like a child

in the purest way.

My only downfall 

was naieveté.

And just like a child 

there were things I didn't know,

feelings I never felt,

like seeds that hadn't grown.

Until you gave me rain

and they started to bloom.

The sun pushed away 

those clouds of gloom.

All of this took 

so much time to do.

Where are you going?

This garden was for you. 

 

◄ Mona Lisa

White Night ►

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Lyrical Lexa

Sat 19th Aug 2017 17:21

Keith,
Thank you so much for the feedback.

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keith jeffries

Sat 19th Aug 2017 16:45

A beautiful poem which conjures up all thoughts of emotions and feelings. Thank you. Keith

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terry l shuff

Fri 18th Aug 2017 16:38

Excellent

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