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YESTERDAY ONCE MORE - a re-post for the summer hols!

Intended for August but I mixed up my dates and it appeared on 31 July.  Oops.  So here it is again.

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Written following a memorable blue-sky afternoon looking out over Preston Sands, Torbay.

Pausing high above the beach,

I watch the children out of reach,

Racing down the golden sand,

Leaping...laughing...hand in hand.

 

Children dancing in the sea

Remind me how I used to be;

Free from care and full of fun,

A happy boy beneath the sun.

 

Time goes by, yet time stands still,

And moment follows moment till

What is now once went before,

And what is past returns once more.

 

I watch the children in the sea,

And when I laugh, they laugh with me;

And when they shout, I shout with joy!

Again I am that happy boy.

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Produced and recited by Peter Dymond on "Poetry To Please".  Thanks Pete!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Aug 2017 15:22

Thanks Harry - always pleasing to know a post can bring
pleasure. Like another poem of mine (The Galmpton Robin)
it came to me almost "as is" - as if it was waiting for the
time and place...know what I mean?

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 3rd Aug 2017 12:57

M.C.
Charming

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Aug 2017 16:03

JC - "a man's gotta know his limitations".
In any event, this was intended, with others, to be set
against a musical setting - and Pete Dymond, with his
experience of doing song demos for me in the past, was
the man for recording the project that I had conceived
for CD as "Poetry To Please".
Ray - simplicity solves so much in life, not least when
it serves to remind us of what once was and can no longer
be. A top example is AE Houseman's "Blue Remembered
Hills".

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Aug 2017 10:09

Lovely postcard of nostalgia, MC. Made more effective by its simplicity. We're recited too. (But why not do the audio yourself?)

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raypool

Tue 1st Aug 2017 21:07

A great sense of innocence right through a life Mark - I almost see Betjeman at the sea with trousers rolled up . Nicely poignant and really simple to reason with.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 1st Aug 2017 17:24

Hi Keith - thanks for your appreciation on the post on 31 July which I've since replaced with this entry for August. I've acknowledged your message elsewhere.
MC

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