I looked at my computer and saw your name at the top,
Write Out Loud, and I had to stop.
It has been a while...since last I wrote,
I thought I would stop, and blog a note.
The clocks are are all chiming,
While I do my best at rhyming.
I have not really got much to say...
So, I guess I'll be on my way.
Hello, and goodbye... I hope you all have a great day!
Susan,
I came upon this just after having had another look at Joy France`s `Loyalty` advert poem.
I was comparing Joy`s to your last one (which is more a remembrance and contemplation upon a childhood event)
I was impressed at how rhyme helps both to `come home`and how Joys style of `delivery` (which is very much her own) helps her poem to `work` so much.
Both have made think of what `poetic` intonation is in modern conditions of performance.
(I`ts only me rambling on as usual ?)
Frivolous and fun! Who hasn't occasionally found themselves in the same situation on WOL? It made me
smile and that's always welcome.
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Susan Greene
Sat 22nd Jul 2017 13:31
Thanks