Hey you groovy guyz what’s going on down
Everybody has just left this sweltering town
And the word is they are heading for the coast
Try and stop me and you will definitely be toast
What on earth is this mass stampede all about?
Anyway I am just going to jump scream and shout
Very nice to meet you vibrant blazing sun
Everybody is on the beach having big fun
Hi Rose - I predict a long hot summer !! - See you on the beach lol. T ?
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sat 24th Jun 2017 23:48
I'm with C.B.T. on this one Tom.
now wheres me 'kini?
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Rose ?
Hi Cynthia - It's a very contrived piece. My earlier offering of "Flaming June" was a little premature. At least the good weather is finally upon us. Thanks for feedback. :)
All out blazing enthusiasm of youth - what's not to love. Really delightful the last two lines, in the innocence of 'talking to the sun'. And it's roughly structured, just like a kid's erratic thoughts. Much enjoyed.
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 25th Jun 2017 11:27
haha! have your speedo's at the ready T.D.!
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Rose ?