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MEET THE RUSSIANS

Global high fliers

strangely captivated

by Big Ben from a yacht

London Bridge

Henley Regatta

all flowing past

like their gowns from Balmain

or glory holes of Mayfair.

 

High heels on lonely hard marble

of bright foyers

to camera flashes

lightning results

always the sun, for the rain

reminds them of peasants

tractors,

now it's X factors

and the world moves on.

 

They exchange their money

for lessons in etiquette

how to impress at Ascot

what to wear, how to behave

who to be seen with

to be humble to

as befits their station,

turning guilty backs

on old high stepping ideals

of a western polluted nation,

 

and the old red carpet gets rolled out

like a river of blood

flowing past and soon forgotten.

◄ HELL AS PARADISE

O TO BE A POET ►

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raypool

Sat 27th May 2017 17:29

Thanks Mark for your considered comments. My poem was mainly angled to the ladies who attach themselves to the demigods - as far as the programme revealed they were plucked from obscurity rather than having means of their own. Of course there is a thriving porn market coming from Russia but we can't possibly comment on that for safety reasons!

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 27th May 2017 13:48

Beneath our desire to be seen as caring and humble lurks
the old human ambition to be "someone" in life - and
wealth is the most visible and influential sign of success,
at least on a surface level. We castigate bankers if they
play fast and unsuccessfully with money, yet slavishly
follow sports people for their brief but often hugely
rewarded forays in their chosen activity, barely rousing
ourselves to comment if they perform badly for their
weekly fortunes; likewise, film and other entertainment
figures.
The emergence of the UK Russian rich folk (probably
originating from the old peasant stock as often as not)
and their appreciation of opulence and privilege is as
good a contemporary example as any of the endless dance of social demarcation that exists in the western world.

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raypool

Fri 26th May 2017 21:29

Thanks Keith for your comment , appreciate it.

David, very entertaining observations, thanks! I like the way the old money mingles with the new - particularly noticeable in the big auction houses who are rubbing their hands in glee at the massive hikes in art prices. A novel Trump emerges.

Thanks Stu, the comparison came to me quite quickly; I could even have mentioned the red army - but that's another story.

Ray.

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Stu Buck

Fri 26th May 2017 11:06

great last verse ray, the image of the red carpet as a river of blood sticks with you

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keith jeffries

Fri 26th May 2017 09:41

Ray, as these thoughts do trickle through my mind, so does the hand of your pen describe. A good poem which should make some sit up to certain realities. Thank you. Keith

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