This morning I included me

Friday 19th May 2017 8:34 am

This morning I asked my mind to be quiet

cause I was talking to me.

Curiously, Right through the years my higher purpose has always been the same --

to reach out, stretch to max and make others feel good.
And yes, whilst I found that soul seductive purpose gratifying
there was still a yawning void, an unfulfilled mission.
So when I finally got my mind to ssshhh
I added ‘me’ to my purpose of peace. I added ‘me’ to my inclusive agenda.
And in the process I discovered more about me.

Then suddenly I felt a warm white glow embrace me,

I felt harmonious.

My inner voice whispered “forget the past

forgive yourself and start again”.

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Raj Ferds

Fri 19th May 2017 19:38

Thank you Cynthia, Rose and Jemima for your enlightening comments.

Hardly an intrusion Rose. You always shine light on work here.

And Cynthia it's amazing how your mind went round it and looked at it different dimensions. Beautiful.

Jemina I like the confluence of heart, mind and soul. So cool.
Individual interpretations are so stimulating!

You'll be surprised that you can actually watch your mind with you mind. try it. Just 'hang out;' with your mind and watch what happens. (Thought I'd throw you another warbler!!!).

Love&Peace&Light
Raj

Jemima Jones

Fri 19th May 2017 19:23

I love this Raj and I also think Rose inadvertently hit on a good idea.Maybe start the first line with the inclusion of heart mind and soul? But nevertheless it is a beautiful poem as it is.Thank you.Jemima.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 19th May 2017 14:38

I think its the reference to that *me,my heart and I* adage Cynthia,while respectfully understanding where you are coming from.

pardon my friendly intrusion Raj.

Rose ?

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th May 2017 11:51

Another work worth reading, as it 'explores and discusses' such important ideas. Mind you (ha ha) I'm a bit puzzled as to how anyone separates 'mind' from 'me'. Perhaps a different direction of 'thinking', but still the same 'mind'? Funny how people use the expression: 'I'm of two minds.....' which means only indecision.

Super title.

Just thinking. That's the effect of your poems. But that IS what you want, isn't it?

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 19th May 2017 10:25

re your welcoming additional welcoming Raj.
Thanks for *stretching out and making ME feel good*

Rose ?&?

Raj Ferds

Fri 19th May 2017 09:57

Thank you Rose, I find that encouraging.
hey great to have you back.

Raj x

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 19th May 2017 09:54

Raj,this so much reminds me of the song/hymn *be still my soul* and almost had the same tear jerking effect on me.

*stretch out to the max and make others feel good*

definitely the best advice one can give our *me's*

loved it and then some!

Rose ?

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