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Thank you

Thank you

 

The word came through this morning

which sent a few into sorrowful mourning

A word much loved and fondly used

had finally been sadly subdued

 

For centuries, minute by minute, hour by hour

this word had been a polite power

It had formed part of our national tradition

not to use it was a serious omission

 

Today the words ¨ Thank you ¨were buried

and their heritance and significance sullied

No longer can ¨  Thank you ¨  be found

in any dictionary so beautifully bound

 

The reason that has been given

is one that cannot be forgiven

They said it had fallen into disuse

out of date and no longer of use

 

Words failed me as I uttered ¨Thank you 

then I left and fell into a thoughful rue

There was nothing I could do or say

¨Thank you ¨  had been taken away

◄ The Darkness of the Night

Afternoon Tea ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 25th Mar 2017 23:33

'Thank you' for posting this Keith - interesting concept. I can't help but think of the wonderful Montag in Ray Bradbury's Fahrenheit 451:

"It took some man a lifetime maybe to put some of his thoughts down, looking around at the world and life, and then I came along in two minutes and boom! it's all over."

Col

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raypool

Sat 25th Mar 2017 18:49

Sadly the grosser expressions of feeling have taken over like subtlety and sincerity paved with bad intentions. We must rise up to give extra weight to such terms! I think of the German: danke schon, followed by bitte schon, an acknowledgment of the gesture.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 25th Mar 2017 17:30

It has been said that courtesy is the oil that lubricates
the wheels of society. Thanks - or thank you - are
vital emollients of civilised existence.

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