pmurt
the human race is deeply flawed
and power does corrupt
still yet we cry, a wailing wall
morality erupts
Comments
thanks paul! i rarely rhyme, i havent the skill for it really and i find the stuff i like to write is too dark for a sing song melody (rhyme is so much more i understand but it really doesnt appeal to me), but this just popped in to my head this morning. im currently working on something delicious dark and sordid to rebalance.
See Stu, you can do the rhyming thing!
That Pmurt, eh, what a tihs....
BTW, please let me thank you again for writing such a kind and warm tribute about my POTW and my writing in general. You are a giant gem of a gent (or diamond geezer, whichever you prefer!).
Paul
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Juan Pablo Lynch
Tue 31st Jan 2017 12:20
Stu, I really liked this Pmurt....It speaks volume in 4 lines...
I think you should try to combine the dark side with a childish sing song rhyme...depending on the lexicon of the poem it may give off an evil idiot vibe or a genius dark lord vibes condescending others.
Once again, great piece.
Juan