pmurt

the human race is deeply flawed

and power does corrupt

still yet we cry, a wailing wall

morality erupts

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Wolfgar Miere

Wed 1st Feb 2017 08:44

Yes Stu,

it is surprising how some believe humans will someday stop being evil, of course as individuals we can and do, and then the moralising, oh how we howl and point our pointy little fingers.

BTW thanks, I have been perusing CWC-ism's due to this introduction.

David.

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Tue 31st Jan 2017 12:20

Stu, I really liked this Pmurt....It speaks volume in 4 lines...
I think you should try to combine the dark side with a childish sing song rhyme...depending on the lexicon of the poem it may give off an evil idiot vibe or a genius dark lord vibes condescending others.
Once again, great piece.

Juan

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Stu Buck

Tue 31st Jan 2017 10:46

thanks paul! i rarely rhyme, i havent the skill for it really and i find the stuff i like to write is too dark for a sing song melody (rhyme is so much more i understand but it really doesnt appeal to me), but this just popped in to my head this morning. im currently working on something delicious dark and sordid to rebalance.

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Paul Waring

Tue 31st Jan 2017 09:37

See Stu, you can do the rhyming thing!

That Pmurt, eh, what a tihs....

BTW, please let me thank you again for writing such a kind and warm tribute about my POTW and my writing in general. You are a giant gem of a gent (or diamond geezer, whichever you prefer!).

Paul

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