Death in Real Time

His last gasp of air


Tick, tock 


She stares in despair 


Tick, tock


But the children keep on screaming

The wind keeps on screeching 

The hammer keeps on pounding

The cars keep on sounding




Tick, tock 


The hour






To stop




It does not

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alan barlow

Sun 29th Jan 2017 16:07

This first reminded me of a piece I wrote a few years back with the interlude of the "tick, tock".

Seems such a long time ago now anyway I enjoyed reading and comparing the 2 thanks for sharing and the trip down memory lane 😃

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