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I Hate You

I hate you 

Can't stand you

I think that I love you

You know me

Ignore me

I want you to love me

I love you 

Just want you

I really do hate you

You see me

Smile at me 

I want you to leave me

I need you

Don't want you

My heart is stuck on you

You want me 

Don't need me

Just stop talking to me

I love you

Don't love you

I just want to hate you

You hate me 

Don't hate me

Just want you to love me






◄ It's the Little Things

Silence (or is it something else?) ►


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Juan Pablo Lynch

Sat 14th Jan 2017 01:49

Sounds like the complicated mine of someone in a bad relationship if you don't mind me saying...Like Colin Hill said, it could be expanded and made way more complicated, like maybe if you add another persona and made this into a dialogue...great work

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Sat 14th Jan 2017 00:22

This sounds a little bit like in my head... very good ??

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 10th Jan 2017 08:17

mixed emotions - interesting concept for a poem which could be expanded and made more complicated - thanks for posting Piper.

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