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Harbour

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Late morning

the sun high

above the harbour

all is quiet

except for the ferry

that docks every hour

to collect the tourists

and the occasional

morning boat

tugging slowly to it’s destination.

The sea is calm

and glinting softly

and there is nothing turbulent,

no breeze or murmur,

no mention of the way

the world really is,

so you know you must

try to keep it somehow,

and watch it closely

and hold it for all the moments

that won’t be this;

The sweet industry

of the harbour,

It’s ferry and it’s boats,

The waiting captain

and idle walkers,

talking busily in the middle

of their  lives.

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Tom Harding

Fri 18th Nov 2016 20:00

thanks all, some really nice comments. thanks again

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Martin Elder

Thu 17th Nov 2016 23:13

You have painted a beautiful picture her Tom. It sounds like the sort of place that I could stand all day and just watch the goings on. Fab

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Thu 17th Nov 2016 12:25

I totally agree with the lines Harry refers to.Excellent piece Tom.







Rose.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 17th Nov 2016 11:58

excellently good Tom,
I particularly like the way that;

`no breeze or murmur,
no mention of the way
the world really is`

holds the whole thing together in a sort of peaceful kind of
ordinariness.

and also that:

`and hold it for the moments
that won`t be this;`

And also the way those last seven lines `sum it up` so calmly.

Outstanding!

Jemima Jones

Thu 17th Nov 2016 10:47

Lovely Tom.Thank you.Jemima.

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