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Haiku Collection #6


farewell my old skin
tattooed to amuse myself
words no longer true
~~~
this joy so fragile
my moon so white and slender
a breeze could take it
~~~
you sense the old man 
with one more sad tale to tell
let star-gazing win
~~~
what of the coconut-
atom wrestles ocean
for the fabled shore
~~~
the man in the moon
disregarding all evil
takes a giant leap

 

 

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Stu Buck

Thu 22nd Sep 2016 12:30

what of the coconut-
atom wrestles ocean
for the fabled shore

i absolutely love this one. it places image and intrigue over description which is what i enjoy most about haiku. brilliant, but no idea why.

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