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Nothing But Good

I love it when we sleep

all snuggled up like Babes in the Wood

a jumble of innocense

we are nothing but good.

love; sleep; snuggle; innocense; goodness

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Andy N

Thu 25th Aug 2016 12:46

nice use of the last line here.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 23rd Aug 2016 13:32

I enjoyed the image of innocence briefly yet convincingly
conjured up in these lines.

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