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insidious

I forgot all I knew

just so I could forget you.

 

Your cheap parlour tricks

that seduced my wandering eye..

 

I followed them..head panning along

within deadlong continuum for

intel's trance and chance' sake..

 

and, now--

in my former reality erased--

you struggle to re-create your former place.

◄ graduation party

flight from the aerodome ►

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elPintor

Mon 22nd Aug 2016 23:35

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCc-RWIp7XU


HA! Henry Kissinger..this is what I was telling Ray about..I'll really have to watch my back now.

Thanks, David..I'll have a couple for you this evening.

elP xx

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raypool

Mon 22nd Aug 2016 10:16

Just coming back elP to say I always try to couch my comments in the realm of imagination too, hoping to get nearer to truths rather than a surgical assessment of construction. I am only an amateur after all !

Ray

elPintor

Mon 22nd Aug 2016 00:51

Thanks, Ray..but, I tell you, I am more fond of some of the comments I read than my own writing sometimes..yours included.

elP

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raypool

Sat 20th Aug 2016 22:02

Like a hall of mirrors, a Bruce Lee film elP. I love "deadlong continuum". Inspired. It has a power displayed within its brevity.

Ray

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