How could I ever be so blind
To miss what was so plain to see
If I unlocked my shackled mind
How could I ever be so blind
With open eyes I’d surely find
Such love I thought could never be
How could I ever be so blind
To miss what was so plain to see
I like the "circular" nature of these lines - carrying truth
not restricted to love alone...and indeed, the former word
could replace "love" in this concise and canny contribution.
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Stu Buck
Fri 19th Aug 2016 20:53
excellent triolet. quite envious, even though its simple i still file such things under 'things i cannot do' but its pulled off here with aplomb. simple but effective.