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Love at the nets (2)

(A  her, him, them, and us poem)

 

 

Look at the grace of her!
The leap,
The sweep,
The joy of the game in the face of her!

 

That delicate chip of her!
The snick,
The flick,
The swing of the curve of the hip of her!

 

The glorious zest of her!
The bounce,
The flounce,
The exuberance swelling the breast of her!

 

........................

 

Look at the pace of him.
The slam,
The wham,
The clench of the fist at the ace of him.

 

The arrogant craft of him.
The chip,
The flip,
the twist of the wrist on the haft of him.

 

His dismay at her final dispatch of him.
The shout
of `out`,
The shame of her `game set and match` of him.

 

................................

 

And then they became a mixed pair of them? 
The link!
The sync!
Of the duplicate game-winning flair of them.

 

And afterwards made man-and-wife of them.
Jill and Chris 
Full of bliss
At the other one sharing the life of them.

 

Crowning the nuptial joy of them
By mating,
Creating,
A cute little girl and a boy of them.

 

............................................

 

(The conception they leave in us

Is the weave

And retrieve

Of perpetual Adam and Eve in us) 

◄ Love at the nets

Fiesty old pro-choice Celia dies in the care home ►

Comments

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 25th Jul 2016 12:19

Thanks M.C. and Ray,
Much appreciated.

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raypool

Sat 23rd Jul 2016 22:20

Delightful Harry. Clever construction and so lyrical , Shades of Miss Joan Hunter Dunn, very English as of Betjeman. An impressive format and quite wonderful

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Jul 2016 16:48

And as pleasing as ever!
You have to know what you're doing to attempt this sort
of thing and be able pull it off with such rewarding results.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 23rd Jul 2016 02:12

I thought I`d better do what I said quickly in case I got too bloody lazy to do it at all....( see my comment on the original)

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