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unbroken

to return to that place, I say not, but only

to find what was once lost


to fix the broken part of me..broken

to make what never was


to pull down the shade screens formed

to blind the penitent to newly ordered crimes


and forever fix this rift between the fixers and I.

defiancerejectionresolve

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elPintor

Sun 29th May 2016 13:04

Thanks, Stu, I'll take that coming from you.

And, David, fortunately for me, it was someone else's imagination regarding the past. And, yes, I hope to disappoint them entirely.

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Stu Buck

Sun 29th May 2016 11:04

great this. i love the way your writing seems to cut out one part of a bigger story and leaves the reader wondering. its great, true poetry.

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