rainmaker
breeze grazes an
electric pique over my skin
water warmed by sun over sand
washes over my feet
somewhere from across oceans
the moon pushes another storm
into the calm and beyond
the approaching night
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elPintor
Thu 26th May 2016 23:44
Hey, David,
The scene is very basic, but I was doing my best to convey, simply, the feeling of a brief moment.
There is a great sense of inter-connectedness within nature..it almost seems as if we've forfeited our place in it sometimes, though.
It's always good to hear from you,
elP