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wetting her lips

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where butter melts

and honey drips

and parting comes

from parted lips

 

with my finger

I smear the dew

its knowing touch

from knowing you.

 

their nacent access 

my tongue enquires

their warming wetness

 wanting fires.

 

 

words and foto  Tommy Carroll

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<Deleted User> (4172)

Mon 18th Apr 2016 12:02

Honey drips, parted lips; heat and sensuality, works for me, like it.

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raypool

Mon 18th Apr 2016 11:09

A perfect description of sensuousness and anticipation Tommy. Very enjoyable - reminiscent of the Magnum adverts if I may say !

Ray

Lynn Hamilton

Mon 18th Apr 2016 10:06

Yummy! x

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Lynn Dye

Mon 18th Apr 2016 07:53

Beautiful. I enjoyed this, Tommy.

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