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MARXMAN. "All About Eve". 1993. original album version.

 

 

I often think about her, 

turning away,

and pointing.

She points

(always)

from a winning stance...

She says that she

thinks about me,

or so she says...

I  think of her push and shove

laugh, and her fingered

arguments- I was wrong

she was often correct

and as

we crawled into each other's 

wet laugh, 

we waited,

and she waited

longer. 

◄ Her shadowed look

wetting her lips ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Mar 2016 11:02

It's superb, Tommy. 'her fingered arguments' and 'we crawled into each other's wet laughs' are, IMO, outstanding. And the title itself.

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