Haiku: Sunset beach
red sun horizon
tranquillity thus defined
sea accepts descent
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Lynn - seems like my ramblings are bringing out the best in others. This is beautiful.
Rob
Thank you for your kind comments, Rose.
Well, fortunately I managed to miss those two senior motorcyclists yesterday, phew!
Lynn x
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 10th Apr 2016 18:07
Lynn I can almost hear the water lapping and the glugging sound of glasses being filled (g&t for moi)
And should you be venturing out this evening,keep your eyes peeled for two senior motorcyclists.I've heard that because of their jealousies,they love nothing better than running over lovely ladies!
Rose.x
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 10th Apr 2016 14:41
and do you know why you received three notifications from us chuck? because.........
you're worth,worth,worth it/them....;o)
now,back to our motorbike.The pot-holed roads and sunshine are calling-helmets on!
P&S
Thank you so much Patricia and Stef for kind comments.
Incidentally, your last words must be right because I received 3 notifications that you liked my poem, ha ha! x
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 10th Apr 2016 11:51
Now then! who is a clever lady? Love,love,loved this.
P&S
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Lynn Dye
Mon 11th Apr 2016 14:51
Thank you Rob, I much appreciate your kind words.