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THE CYCLIST

As if in a picture frame, he is mounted .

The cyclist must explore

 

by movement, defining limits

to become the picture within

as an image imagined

sensed by a sort of freedom.

The oils must be built up

smearing his face

and every moving part

in fortune's light.

 

He becomes trapped

in the world that must hang

forever where the

valleys meet the hills,

but first the toiling,

and clouds in their mockery

are added in huge sweeps

and with his struggle the paint sets

as he rides into an

unimpeachable sunset.

◄ FALSE MODESTY

FANTASY WARD ►

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raypool

Thu 10th Mar 2016 22:40

Thanks for your appreciation Stu and Jemima.

Ray x

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Stu Buck

Tue 8th Mar 2016 13:27

this is great ray. really lovely words and lots of lingering meaning.

Jemima Jones

Sat 5th Mar 2016 23:31

Very nicely 'framed Ray.Love the ending.
Thank you.Jemima

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