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FALSE MODESTY

false modesty follows me about

like a gun dog blinded and deafened by doubt

eating scraps at a sumptuous feast

of no real use to man or beast.

 

It feels like to be or not to be

my lesser shadow dogging me,

as I secretly sift through hidden gems

that my own worst critic often condemns

 

the accursed gun dog is always to hand

with its back towards the promised land.

◄ SEXUAL UNION

THE CYCLIST ►

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raypool

Fri 4th Mar 2016 14:30

Thanks Stu. I can't possibly accept any praise after this poem but it still feels good!

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Stu Buck

Fri 4th Mar 2016 09:42

a fine grasp of metaphor in this one. self effacing and humurous. the last lines are great.

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