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Storm

A brightly guttering light draws me to the window.

Raindrops rebound from the sputtering street,

As a solitary, hunching figure runs, splashing, towards a waiting car,

Clutching a coat collar at the neck.

A grumbling bass growls in the darkness.

I look up again as the sky is slashed

With a streaking, silvery laceration.

A dissonant dull roaring again rolls across the sky,

Scant moments after the lightning’s lambent luminesence.

I open the door and stand transfixed,

Revelling in the pulsating potency of the tempest.

Gradually, I notice the dull drumming of the downpour,

Forming a pattering, pounding undercurrent to the storm.

The ominous, looming layers fleetingly part,

Allowing a gauzy glimpse of the crescent moon to emerge,

Peeking through the roiling rainclouds.

As I step out, my arms outstretched to the sky,

The impelling intensity of the deluge

Seems, almost impossibly, to increase further.

Head angled up, eyes closed, the torrent runs across my cheeks.

I sputter out the water that dribbles between my lips

With the unfathomable force of the falling flood.

The lightning slithers savagely across the heavens once more,

And the thunder thrums again, more rapidly this time.

The storm is getting closer.

Exulting in the imperious power of the elements,

I linger a few moments longer, luxuriating in this sensation.

I turn back inside, away from the spectacular storm,

And close the door.

◄ Of Starlings

Ode To Lely’s Venus ►

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 13th Feb 2016 18:48

Vivid! One of the elemental forces readily available to us
in whatever place we happen to be at the time - but there
is that comforting "close the door" that allows us to shut
it out when seeking refuge.
I recall being high on a bare Scottish Highland hillside when
one of those dry storms - with looming pink skies and
distant drums of thunder - seemed likely to materialise
overhead. Quickly placing my backpack down, I moved
away and made myself as small as possible for someone
of 6'4". Thankfully, the conditions improved around me
and I was able to go on my way...with a muttered
prayer of thanks.

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