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Be Mine Tonight

For a night

Just for a few hours

Let's pretend love doesn't hurt

Hold me, nestled against my growing belly

Your hand, as it travels all the way down

To stake claim to what is not yours.

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Corr Lens

Sun 10th Jan 2016 10:42

I have so many questions but I think answers would ruin it. Need to read this one a couple more times.

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 29th Dec 2015 13:00

You have mail!'

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 29th Dec 2015 11:59

You clever girl.
The knowledge of his lack of knowledge.
However, pretending love doesn't hurt is a difficult ask.
It always does, even when it's good!

Happy New Year Preeti!

Graham

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Vicki Ayers

Mon 28th Dec 2015 19:45

Yes interesting - body or baby - or both - and 'not yours...' Something I can identity with - I like it! Vic x

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 28th Dec 2015 16:07

Baby or body? I'm tempted to advise you on the structure of this piece (very seldom if ever have I been so to do ((??)) )

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