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Distance

It could be miles

Or kilometers

A breath apart

Whispers away

Watching love depart

Wrapped in a coat of cynicism

Gloved in cold fingers

Shivers of heat

I told you it wouldn't last.

 

 

 

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Martin Elder

Wed 16th Dec 2015 22:55

simply but effective in all that it says and what it evokes. Love the difference between 'gloved in cold fingers and shivers of heat'

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 15th Dec 2015 21:10

Clinical lines.
Lines 6,7,8 say it all.

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