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What

What is your problem

She asked as she recovered barely

From the massive push he gave her

Falling on the bed

You, he replied

As his mouth covered hers

In desperation, pressure increasing

Trying to control a will

Which wouldn't become  willing

Will, won't. Will, won't

 

◄ Be Mine Tonight

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Vicki Ayers

Sun 10th Jan 2016 20:24

I like this Preeti - powerful x

Patrick Rushe

Sun 10th Jan 2016 15:20

A captured moment in life...great poem...

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 10th Jan 2016 12:40

Your work continues to keep us guessing and I wonder whether this is the real you or someone who speaks through the work itself.

Readers on WOL often make the wrong assumption on autobiographical writing, so I won't be drawn.

well done,

Graham

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