lost love pt 2

I don't know if I trust you 
I don't know if you should 

The pain you bring to this relationship is from your childhood 

The messages you sent of hate 
I know, please don't say it's too late 

My heart is heavy and I'm starting to shake 
Can't see you see how you have broke me this is just heartache 

I watch you fall and I know it's my fault 
I broke your heart with a heavy assault 

Then give me time 
Please forgive me 
I've no answer now I'm surrounded by debris 

◄ Snowfall

Cancer ►


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Freda Davis

Sun 27th Dec 2015 19:44

This is an interesting form Ria. It sounds as if it is a conversation between two people. It expresses bewilderment and pain from both sides I think. It shows how ambiguous this sort of situation can be, not wanting to give up but realising the danger. You are not afraid of hard subjects are you?
Well written.

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