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Just like Lord Byron I sit tonight

pen in hand by candlelight

 

I walked abroad, the wind was high

galloping trees disturbed my eye.

Beetling roofs betrayed the light

that flickered in windows in dwindling sight

 

when of a sudden the power went down

a breath of God blown all around.

 

Within the blackness a chasm yawned

beneath my darkened feet it formed

 my cataract  prematurely lit

with pulsing swirl as in a fit.

 

Then I found my welcoming door

as shut as a tomb not as before

 

now I sit as Lord Byron might

with pen in hand by candlelight

 

and muse on how the end of a day

can take both light and breath away.

 

 

◄ THE WISDOM OF THE UPRIGHT SPINE

THE DAY THE CLOUDS CAME ►

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raypool

Wed 18th Nov 2015 19:21

Thanks chaps. It was quite scary just the wind, but then the cut as well! then the candlelight - how could I go wrong? I tried to convey a mix of gothic and modern, a challenge!
thanks for reading.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 18th Nov 2015 17:07

Fun to see this sort of post - not always the easiest to
try yet alone complete.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 18th Nov 2015 15:50


Neat, Ray, and Byronically apt.

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Patricio LG

Wed 18th Nov 2015 13:34

too true it gives one time to think though. :-), this damn wind has broken my shed. How small we are

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