Forget about Gods
in their various forms of madness
or alternatively the single God
in his uniqueness.
Instead
respect the big cats
pumas tigers lions and their kind.
look into those eyes
place your respect and fear
pay your dues
know that true life lurks there
in blood
instinct
raw sex
kindredship
love of a kind
and finally ask that question
about the wisdom of the upright spine.
Very good one, a great subject well exercised.
Thank you Stu - yes I think ideas like your own trigger my own maybe. A good thing! I was pleased with the ludicrous antedote to standing up. However, lots of back problems ensue from that one postural question mark.
Ray .
Tim, lovely to have a new face making comments. It's been a productive day for a change.
A powerful poem Ray, packing a lot of truth and feeling into a few words.
more blood and sex!
funny that all the things that seperate us from such 'savage' beasts should be our downfall!
enjoyed this, especially the last line which is excellent.
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raypool
Tue 17th Nov 2015 20:19
I'm pleased you like this one Cynthia. It takes your eye off the ball maybe and not really esoteric but a practical study of life in the raw(no pun intended).
cheers Ray