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Devil could not be God

If willing
Their belief
On almighty
To relinquish
And  from
Their soul
For lucifer
Proffer
A special dish,
For a while,
Devil will not be
Unwilling to grant
Sorcery and occultism
Blindfolded fools
The financial bonanza
They gluttonously wish
Or an earthly pleasure
They die to relish.

But at the height of
Their self contentment,
With a stab on the back
With a sharp knife
Satan will ramshackle
his subject's life.

Devil could
Not be God
However hard
he play-act
When approached
Ensconced on his abode.//

 

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Wed 4th Nov 2015 11:55

It is men,the handiworks of God, that created all gods,though by logic all gods are created by God or subject to God.

When it comes to religion the original one is the right one,says the bible!

God is God we must not tamper with that.Even a god mocks one for taking him God.

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Wed 4th Nov 2015 06:07

God doesn't slam one as a price for something good He did.I am talking about the God that created all gods including Satan.
"Examine all roads and follow the original one ,"says the bible.What do I care about religions dished out by the day?
Our children may come with a religion we have no inkling about and that may require the scarification of human beings.
There is also no poem flawless even among those crafted by famous classic poets.The advantage of a blog unlike books is poets get an immediate chance to remedy errors.
I wrote this poem because a wealthy merchant, with a bagful of dollars, next door to the one I lodged in Bahir Dar,shot a bullet into his head.You see he was dealing with Satan going to Blue Nile river.
Satan might have asked him to sacrifice his child or his wife.
Unlike God at last Satan ask a price for what he did.
But as you said I may change the word fools as it could be provoking and my intention is edifying

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