August Collage Poem: Making Poetic Hay
A caged bird in Wetherspoon's
Flashing jazz through messy mental maps
On skull-grey stepped buildings
Where books and more books glimpse
of measured escape
Over corridors blocking ways out
edited down stopping feelings
of revenge pleading eases
enchanted in a warped love
Messy murder, mental madness
Who is free and who is caged?
Too many hang-ups on my mental map
Seashore, blue skin and a dear gust of air
The odd wink of an old man as he sips
his watered-down half-pint
Autobiographical assonance enchants.
John F Keane
Sun 20th Sep 2015 12:32
Re-reading this, I have to say it is quite brilliant.
Well done, everybody.