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LOVE SONG

My love told me you took my song

And made the words your own

That time you tried to capture her

When you two were alone.

 

But I won't talk of any blame

For what you tried to do

In your place playing your game

I may have been like you.

 

But here is something you should know:

She loves the melody.

As for the words (she told me so)

She prefers them mouthed by me!

 

 

 

 

 

 

◄ WITH YOU

TWO SIDES TO THE COIN ►

Comments

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 29th Jul 2015 18:09

Thanks for the comment JC.
This began as material for a song lyric but it seemed to
change into poetic form before my eyes even as I wrote it.

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John Coopey

Wed 29th Jul 2015 16:14

All the more effective for being so simple, MC.

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