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Picnic

 

A perfect day on velvet hill

where wild garlic grows,

cabbage white seeks cabbage, and still wings stir.

 

This dreamy afternoon

the grass grows dry and warm.

The air wears the hum of the hoverfly

 

The young leave the warren,

play tag in the bracken, investigate the slopes,

bravely explore the other side, forget to hide.

 

Soundless, unseen, she circles above,

The raptor locks her eye, drops from blue canvas sky.

 

Swift and silent, she makes her kill,

Death comes daily to velvet hill.

 

One young rabbit, there are plenty left

for tomorrow’s picnic in the buzzard’s nest.

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carol falaki

Mon 25th May 2009 19:28

Thanks Cynthia, we found a young rabbit last year who we think had been picked up and then dropped by a buzzard. It broke or hearts, we didn't know what to do with him, he was in pain and couldn't walk. Life certainly can be brutal. We left him to his fate, out of sight under a bush. It probably would have been kinder to kill him.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 25th May 2009 18:48

I love realism: the beautiful and the brutal ... you are very sensitive to place and atmosphere and express it with well-chosen words. I liked it a lot.

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