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BLAZER POCKET

Timetable torn in two

Covered in fluff, grit and

Other unidentifiable residue

Instructs you

Where you should be

Weekday between nine and three

If not held together right

You’ll be going to English class

At midnight

 

A blue pen in hiding

Has blown its cover

Left bendy and limp

Adding its mark to your

Timetable print

But you will struggle on, I know

With tongue stuck out to one side

Concentrating, not daring

To ask for another

 

The shatterproof ruler

A claim too hard to ignore

Reduced to smaller plastic bits

None of which will measure

Over an inch, I’m sure

But you will have a go

Underlining, shifting, underlining

And shifting

With your bendy limp blue pen

 

The fallout of wrappers

Of the hubba bubba crew

Shoved in your mouth

One directly after another

Sending your jaw into a

Slow motion, over committed, chew

Breaking down the matter

Of which would

Fill a crack in a nuclear reactor

 

The tangled and twisted wires

Umbilical cord of twins

Connects to your head

To feed you from a placenta

Of surround sound

Via your ears

It makes you sing so sweetly

Without knowing I can hear

 

Emptying your blazer pocket

I find you and I feel joy

My beautiful, beautiful boy

◄ Concrete Eyes

SOMETIMES ►

Comments

Travis Brow

Fri 12th Jun 2015 07:36

Lynn, it's the shattered ''shatterproof ruler / / Underlining, shifting, underlining / And shifting'' that does it for me. I know it relies on my own memories but sometimes, as Tommy suggests, it's precisely this quality that makes a poem memorable.

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Darren Lea-grime

Fri 12th Jun 2015 00:32

loved this one, it was well worth the wait until the end in wigan.
daz

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Andy N

Mon 8th Jun 2015 12:47

the last stanza perhaps tells a bit for my liking, but it's needed i think here.

again some excellent images and ideas in this. keep it up

Preeti Sinha

Mon 4th May 2015 16:21

Good one, as always !

Lan

Sat 2nd May 2015 14:54

Hi Lynn, this is beautiful, So much love in your description, thanks for sharing x

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 2nd May 2015 13:04

"Slow motion, over committed, chew" been there done that. Lovely imagery Lynn. Tommy

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