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Pet Name Friends

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Why don't you call me love anymore?
nobody’s stolen my nickname you know.
though I know my name was christened
so use to having listened,
all these years, to you calling me love
so when I hear 1st name terms
it seems alien
and cold
the beginning of the end
pet name friends
cant pretend any longer
shes stopped,
and,
like the first turn on a lock,
it will throw us apart
forever.

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Isobel

Mon 4th May 2009 20:52

A very poignant poem and so much truth in it. With my ex I was always Izz until things went sour and then I became Isobel and I just hated the thin raspy way he used to say it. I always used his Christian name (which was short enough) until things soured and then I just called him bastard...

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shoeless

Sun 3rd May 2009 22:47

an emotive poem . laura you have your moments :) x

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Andy N

Sun 3rd May 2009 22:20

short but beauitful..

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Sun 3rd May 2009 19:57

Grand eloquence: emotional punch. You pitch 'em hard, Ms de Mar, and they hit the mark.

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Francine

Sun 3rd May 2009 19:53

Awww... so true...

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