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when you said
inside my head
is where you like to be
I wonder - since so silent,
if the lid I prized for you,
should never have gone pop.
Honey goes with lemon
but only when your ill.
perhaps my emptiness shocked?
thoughts
to be farmed or shopped
commodities
all lifted
nothing there
stolen
by alcohol and queen bees
lost my strength, stripped of hair
twisted
still got the barb in.
'still got the barb in' = the Bee sting barb is still stuck in skin even long after lover left.
Ain't that the truth!
Cx
<Deleted User>
Sun 3rd May 2009 19:29
lid + prized = Proud to keep some thoughts special just for someone.
OR opened the lid on secret thoughts, and found that they were shallow/empty in the light of day not that worrying after all.
'still got the barb in' = the Bee sting barb is still stuck in skin even long after lover left.
thanks Mox n Francine
<Deleted User> (7790)
Sun 3rd May 2009 19:22
Is the answer mead, Ms de Mar? Love the 'pop.. shocked...shopped...stripped...barb' dot to dot sense and sensuousness links. And the mind being stolen like honey. Fabulosa!
I like this... although please explain these lines:
'if the lid I prized for you'
'still got the barb in.'
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winston plowes
Mon 4th May 2009 15:43
Hi Loretta
Great stuff, concise... great combinations of images which fit together nicely
Win