Beyond the Sub-conscious
His fingers waken running through her hair
Only pulling back when she opens her eyes
Blinkered by the yellow sunset like flowers
Dropping consciously across the windowsill
Dangling on like fingers on a balcony
Tied up in invisible chains across derelict moods
Journeying beyond invisible emotions
Streaming conscious all over the place
Like totally mis-matched kissing
Beyond the sub-conscious.
(Wrote from Linda's prompt on http://writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=45186)
Gray Nicholls
Sat 22nd Nov 2014 15:39
agree with isobel here, andy. lot of good ideas running through this and you don't overdo it also.