Talk to me

 

Talk to me, remember? Like when you broke a heel,

The day that he came to you and I said he wasn't real.

You shy away yet shout abuse, words spitting in my face,

Your strap slipped from your shoulder and it ended the embrace,

 

Wildly, while I plead for calm, You rush to be with him,

Spinning, then crashing, the sound deafening,

If only I could rip the keys, from your clawing grasp,

 

Caressing your face through matted red hair,

Lay there quiet now with eyes a glassy stare,

Come back, come back, I love you, but again you speak his name,

My mind splinters into chaos.... as I realise you're insane.

 

(c)Paul Letch 2008 Murky Pool Publishing Ltd.

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 20th Apr 2009 20:52

Hi Paul,
i like the range of emotions running through this,
although it's quite shocking, i can feel the panic rising and the striving for calm.
Nice one.
Janet.x

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winston plowes

Mon 20th Apr 2009 16:50

Hi Paul. I liked this a lot. Graphic , strong images and a sort of building in pace till the end

Winston

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